Charles
Stater
Dr.
deGravelles
Block 4
27, April, 2013
Writing Remix- Deadman
Wonderland Poem
Bright Monday sunshine, streaming through
Shattered windows, turning pools of blood to fiery crimson.
Death, everywhere Death, echoes of screams long gone still
Ring in my ears. Convicted, jailed, sent away to a place
Of insanity and cruelty.
Deadman Wonderland, I have arrived.
Strange girl, white skin with red eyes,
Red like the blood of my friends
Leaking from their shattered bodies.
“Let’s eat pudding together someday!”
Love within me, nothing else like it,
Deadman Wonderland, I have arrived.
Carnival Corpse, consisting of conscripted captives
Tearing, slicing, killing, dying.
Branch of Sin, my own blood
Turned against my foes.
Ace Man, Shiro, Red Man, Love
All are the same, I will protect her
Deadman Wonderland, I have arrived.
A unholy priest, sent of an Angel, whether fallen
Or no, that is unknown. New friends, Senji
Karako and Owl, a rebellion is in the air. We must
Stay silent as night, as invisible as blackness, run from
Sakagami Toto.
Deadman Wonderland, I have arrived.
Break out, run, escape
The priest has come, his spells in hand with
Vengeance in mind. Owl has gone to darkness,
He cannot even see himself. Shiro, Karako, only I can save
them.
I will protect my friends
Death and Love, Malice and Justice, they await now, within
the depths of
Deadman Wonderland.
Wow very nice poem. Once again another unique blog post. I must say this is giving off a, more or less, anime vibe. Personally, I am not a fan of this. Of course I watched a little bit of Naurito as a young boy, but that warred of quickly since I found the twisting plot followed with the bits and pieces of Japanese quite confusing. I too chose to create a poem, of course none of my post nor comments posted, which is why I am just commenting now. I am assuming that this is a blog post, yet I could be mistaken. All in all, you have great talents in writing and creating pieces of writing. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI like the tone that you used in this poem, as well as pretty much everything else in this portfolio. Also, the separation is good (I couldn't figure out how to do that , so mine is just a bunch of stuff all in one long post pretty much. I think that from what I remember, your research paper is slightly more resolved in its tone as well, just to add that on. Great portfolio buddy!!!
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